Thursday, December 30, 2010

Hedley Trip

Thirty years ago, Hedley, with his wife Mary and daughter Katie, Visited the Niah Caves in Sarawak, East Malaysia. They travelled by car, ferry and boat.
They sat off from Bandar Seri Begawan, the capital of Brunei and drove to the border with Sarawak. They crossed two large rivers by ferry, stopped in Miri for launch and then continued to Niah, a small river township. Then they took a small boat and soiled upriver to a government rest house, where they spent the night. They ate with the small group of scientists who lived in the rest house and shared the cold drinks they had brought with them in a cool box. It was a remote spot, deep in the jungle. They slept in bunk beds with no air-conditioning. It reached a novel experience.
The next morning, they walked along a jungle path for half an hour until they reached the Niah Cave. Inside the caves, which were very high, they saw men who climbed up tall bamboo poles. The men wore lights on their hats because it was so dark. At the top of the poles they scraped off birds' nests from the roof of the caves. The nests were collected by their mates on the cave floor and put into sacks. These nests were later sold and made into bird's nest soup, a Chinese delicacy.
That afternoon, they said goodbye to their new-found friends in the rest house and set off on the long drive home. It was quite an adventure and one they would never forget.

How to Change a tyer

If you have a car, it's important to know how to change a tyre especially if there is no garage nearby to help out. In this easy, I will write the steps about how to change a tyre.
This is what must be done .First, after stopping and parking in a safe place, the wheel nuts are loosened. This should be done before the car i s raised; using the jack. Then the car is jacked up. Then the nuts and wheel are removed. After that the spare wheel is put on. Then the nuts are lightered and the car is lowered. The nuts are tightened again. Finally, your tools are packed away.
As you can see, changing a tyre is a very simple and straight forward process, but you must follow the above steps in the correct order, particularly the first step of loosening the wheel nuts before you raise the vehicle.
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Reflection 2

Reflection on process writing

When the task is to describe a process using the passive voice/mood, we must use the present passive.

This is formed by using is or are with the past participle, e.g.

Orange juice is stored in a fridge.

The oranges are transported in trucks to the factory.

If we fail to use the passive when we are specifically asked to do so, we are dropped a quarter band, which can mean the difference between passing & failing.